Last night I was out rather late, but I did put in another hour or so and go the potential story length up to four and a half pages.
The opening seems to be way too long before finding a hook...I'm hoping that as I add more material to it there will emerge a better "entry point", and I'll just trim off the material that rambles before it.
I think my "hooking" skills need polishing.
Um...maybe that's not the right way to phrase the sentiment...
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